Chris and I gathered feedback on our second draft so that we can see if and how we could improve our opening sequence. We again asked our peers David and Guy to see if they like what we have improved aswell as gaining ideas on how to make our production better. Both David and Guy liked what we have improved based upon their previous feedback. This was in the form of the film titles at the end of the sequence. This is only a slight tweak to our first draft however it does have an effect as the sequence ends. David and Guy also liked the sound that we have used to accompany the end titles. This aswell helps to create a tense atmosphere as the sequence ends but it also fits perfectly with the end titles. This also is only a minor change but it still creates a big effect on the end of the opening sequence. They also liked how we make the piano music fade away at the end just before the new titles appear. Guy said "The way the music fades away at the end leads you to think that its just going to end there. But then the two titles appear with the loud noise. It kind of sends you into a false sense of security and it keeps the viewer on edge."
We have however also come away with a change that we can make for a third or final draft. This is for us to change the Production Company logos positioning and/or the colours of them. This is because at certain points it can be hard to read what the titles actually say. The screeenshot below is evident to this as the grey part of the films partially blends in with the background and it is hard to read it at first glance.
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