Second Draft

We have now created our second draft. We have improved this based upon the audience feedback from the first draft. Here are the changes we have made in our new draft.

Changes

We have now added in two more title screens at the end of our draft as this was requested from our audience. We have included this instead of the film just simply fading to black. This is something that we should have perhaps included right from the off but it is good know that we have included this. Over the top of these titles we have also added some lound noises for when they appear to add more effect and emphasis on the title. Also just before the end the music we have included gets quieter to add more of an eerie effect as I am reading out the note.