First Draft - Audience Feedback

Chris and I both decided to get audience feedback on our first draft to see how we could improve it for a second draft. We both have ideas ourselves on what we could improve but we also want to see what our audience would want to have improved because ultimately they are who the film is being made for so it should be what they want it to be.

Feedback

Chris and I have both gathered feedback on our first draft. We gained feedback from two of our peers David and Guy. They both found our production to be good and they both liked it. However they still had some things that we could change to make our production better. Guy said that he would like to see a title screen for the film which is something we don't actually have yet but we will look to make that and include it.